How did it happen that their lips came together?
How does it happen that birds sing, that snow melts,
that the rose unfolds, that the dawn whitens behind the stark shapes of trees
on the quivering summit of the hill?
A kiss, and all was said.
~Victor Hugo
I have succumbed to the magic that's filling the air (and the blogosphere). I hadn't given it much thought because hubby and I will be flying back home on the evening of February 14th after nearly 3 weeks in Hawaii for the arrival of a new granddaughter.
I've signed up for the Just Kiss Already Blogfest being hosted by Stina Lindenblatt and Christina Lee. Following is a 250 word excerpt from A Change of Plans, my WIP #1.
Shocked at his unexpected nearness, I started and then staggered, when the ship rolled. As I lost my balance, he seized me around the waist and pulled me close to steady me. I believe it was all the stress I’d been under combined with the surprise of suddenly being in his arms. I lost my head and said the first thing that came to my mind, something I hadn’t even admitted to myself.
“You are so hot,” I murmured.
His eyes opened wide, and my jaw dropped as I realized I’d said it aloud.
“I didn’t say that!” I exclaimed frantically, pulling away from him.
“Oh, no you don’t!” He said as he grabbed me back again. “You can’t say something like that and then just walk away.” He kissed me. It wasn’t forceful or pushy, but rather gentle and tentative.
There was now a war raging inside me. Ms Practical shrieked at me to run, to get away. Miss Romantic shouted that I should put my arms around him and kiss him and touch those incredible shoulders and arms. I was frozen with indecision.
When I didn’t pull away, he kissed me again with more confidence.
My heart was now beating so wildly that I wondered if I was in the throes of a panic attack. I felt like someone had linked me to an outlet that was sending electricity through the marrow of my bones. My fingers and toes tingled. I needed air...
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- A Novel, Hypothetically Speaking
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- Tracy Buscemi
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- Talei Loto
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- Devin Bond
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- Tessa
- Ladybug's Like To Kiss
- The Guardian Writer
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- The Life of a Writer
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- Donea Lee
- Meika @ Waiting on the Muse
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- K. M. Walton
- Madeleine
- PK HREZO
- Jennifer Hoffine
- Myne Whitman Writes
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- J. C. Martin, Fighter Writer
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- Beth's Blog
- Raquel Byrnes, Edge Of Your Seat Romance
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- Alexa @ Not Enough Bookshelves
- Sash
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- Christines Journey
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- Jenna Wallace
- Cupids Arrow Finds My Booty
- Whats a Frango?
- ELAINE
- Kimberleys Kissing Scene!
- Jenn
Lovely kissing scene. I love the accidently, "You are so hot." Too bad it's only so many words. :) Great job.
ReplyDeleteI hope she's going to be okay. :D
ReplyDeletei can't wait to get to know these characters better! who is she and who is he and how did they meet and why do we love him so much? can't wait! :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, very nice excerpt. I like that the scene takes place on a ship.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene. Love and lust on the high seas.
ReplyDeleteAhh kissing. I love to read a good build up--especially if it comes to nothing. It's the suspense that keeps me turning pages, "Will they?"
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your excerpt...so brave. I especially like:
Shocked at his unexpected nearness, I started and then staggered, when the ship rolled. As I lost my balance, he seized me around the waist and pulled me close to steady me.
You are so hot! And then a diss! And then a kiss! Love it!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, I absolutely loved this! As soon as she burst out with the "You are so hot" and then freaked when she realized it had been said out loud, I knew this is a heroine I can totally follow through a story!
ReplyDeleteThis is great. I'm glad he didn't let her get away, and I'm glad she gave in to Miss Romantic. :D
ReplyDeleteI need some air, too. Great descriptive job. Bravo. Roland
ReplyDeleteWonderful and romantic. Nice to meet you.
ReplyDeleteNancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author
"You are so hot!" Love it! Wasn't quite expecting it from the set up - so fun! Thanks for sharing ~ and I see you've already been by today, but just hoped you noticed that you won a prize on my blog today. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteThis is nicely done. Love it! Happy Valentine's Day.
ReplyDelete'You are so hot,' I murmured.
ReplyDeleteHis eyes opened wide, and my jaw dropped as I realized I’d said it aloud.
Ohmygod, haha, love it! :D
So funny and sweet and romantic. Great job
ReplyDeleteCute and funny!
ReplyDeleteAnd I LOVE that Miss Romantic is a Miss, while Ms Practical is a Ms. Subtle but very, very funny!
Oh hot kiss! Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI hope you're enjoying Valentines Day. ;-)
I LOVE that she told him he was hot! I've been afraid of blurting out that exact same thing more times than I can count. Though it never quite ended like that for me!
ReplyDeleteHow embarrassing to say that out loud, but it looks like it worked out for her in the end.
ReplyDeleteI literally snorted reading, "You're so hot!"
ReplyDeleteGreat kiss!
I loved this - the mispoken word, the internal struggle, and the gentle...gentleman...very seductive ^_^
ReplyDeleteOh I love that "you are so hot!" LOL. You definitely can not say that and walk away :)
ReplyDeleteGreat scene
I once said a guy's name in drool-worthy tones and he overheard me...it didn't turn out this good though.
ReplyDeleteHa, ha! That was quite funny!
ReplyDeleteI love that she tried to take it back...too late! Great scene!
ReplyDeleteEdge of Your Seat Romance
Oh, don't you hate it when you blurt out what you really think when safe should be the default mode of operations. She ended up with a great kiss as a reward though. :)
ReplyDeleteOOh I loved where she said it out loud and then realised, shows how caught up in the moment she was :O)
ReplyDeleteI love the whole war waging inside of her and that she let that sentence slip! NICE!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love how you bantered between her practical and romantic sides. I really like the voice of the male, too. Nicely done!! I'm a follower now.
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