Thank you, Donna, for allowing me to sit in for a guest spot
today!
I thought I’d talk about voice and writing a first-person
narrative from multiple points-of-view.
This is how I constructed my newly released novel, The Mistaken. Because the story is so emotionally charged,
I used three characters to fully engage the reader and show the devastating
impact of the novel’s events. Using only
one perspective would have greatly limited my ability to tell the whole story.
Though I rely more heavily on one character—the male
protagonist, Tyler Karras—I also use his wife in a limited capacity. It was important to show how Jillian takes a
stand against her husband’s wishes and how her act of defiance ultimately
contributes to her demise. Her death
leads to Ty’s downward spiral and all the problems that result: his alcoholism
and consuming need for revenge against the woman he feels is responsible. The third perspective—Hannah Maguire—is the
woman Tyler
mistakenly targets for revenge. As his
wrongly accused victim, her voice offers sharp contrast to the remorse-stricken
protagonist, whom some call an anti-hero.
When I started writing, I did so in close third-person, but
that felt too detached and remote. So I
switched to first, which allowed me to furrow deep within the minds of each
character. I know, some readers don’t
care for head-hopping, but I think it works when there’s a limited number, their
voices are distinct, and are held per chapter.
The trick is not to hop too often, so for each character, I stuck to
multiple consecutive chapters to develop a strong voice.
Each voice has its own style and flavor that comes from deep
inside the character. It’s their way of speaking, their syntax, jargon,
or particular vernacular. Even their opinions are laced within their
voices. It is the intimate details of each character’s life experience
that makes each voice unique, that calls to the reader to come close, have a
seat, and sit a spell while they tell you their side of the story.
It takes a keen understanding of who exactly is telling the
story and why. The perspective and voice are the embodiment of that
spirit. And in the end (as well as the beginning), it’s what keeps the
reader reading. No matter how good the plot, if the POV is underdeveloped
or the voice falls flat, the reader loses interest. Same holds true for
too much voice, and in some cases, too many POVs, stretching the story thin in
the name of breadth and clarity.
So what are your preferences for points of view? Do prefer first or third person? Does having multiple POVs enrich or dilute
the story for you?
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Praise for The Mistaken:
“A deliciously slow burn that builds to a ferocious
crescendo, Nancy S. Thompson's THE MISTAKEN kept me riveted until the very last
page. Tyler Karras is a complex and flawed protagonist, and his redemptive
journey makes him the perfect anti-hero. This psychological suspense is a
standout, and I can't wait for Thompson's next book.”
~ Jennifer Hillier,
author of CREEP and FREAK
“Nancy S. Thompson's debut novel, The Mistaken, is
a first-rate thriller full of hair-raising twists and turns. Pursued
by the police and the Russian mafia in San Francisco, brothers Tyler and Nick Karras
are fascinating, fully-drawn, desperate characters. The action is
non-stop. Thompson's taut, intriguing tale of revenge, mistaken identity,
kidnapping and murder will keep you enthralled and entertained.”
~Kevin O’Brien, New York
Times Bestselling Author of DISTURBED and TERRIFIED
“Fast-paced and emotionally gripping - once the ride begins,
you won't stop reading until it ends."
~Alex J. Cavanaugh, author of
CASSAFIRE and CASSASTAR
The Mistaken Blog
tour:
10/18: Mark Koopmans & Nancy S. Thompson
10/19: Alex J. Cavanaugh & Arlee Bird
10/22: Carrie Butler & Jeff O’Handley
10/23: Julie
Musil
10/24: Donna Weaver, Melissa Maygrove & Hope Roberson
10/25: Matthew
MacNish
10/26: LG Smith
10/27: Aimee Jodoin
10/29: Heather
M. Gardner
10/30: Lisa
Regan & Falling For Fiction
10/31: Jennifer
Hillier
11/1: Angela Peart & Livia Peterson
11/19: Arlee Bird
